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Review:The Empress says:
Melanie, this is beautiful. Not to mention extremely unique. Minerva/Myrtle. You have Officially Gone Where No One Has Before.

The imagery you painted with your words here is just stunning. The interaction between Minerva and Myrtle in the flashbacks is powerful. I can't even put into words what I mean. Mostly that this has blown me away. It paints Minerva in a way I've never seen her before. Someone with very great faults, someone who might hurt someone else just to feel needed. Or whatever weird game she was playing with Myrtle's feelings. It's immensely powerful.

The questions asked. 'Do you really suffer?' That entire bit, about her grieving, or not grieving is probably my favorite in the whole piece. That and the ending. About the familiar wail and Minerva thinking that this is grief. Nobody left to weep. WOW

I love you and your amazing writing skills. And I am using this for the new Chaser, just so you know :)

*squishes*
~Shiloh

Author's Response: Thanks for the great review, Shiloh! I am so flattered. I always worry about my capabilities with imagery and emotions, so to hear you enjoyed it so much is really awesome.

And oh, yes, Minerva's faults! I really love her character, but it was fun doing something else with her for a change.

THANK YOU for featuring this in the Chaser! I am speechless!

xoxo
Melanie


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