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Review:lovelyinsane says:
Hello dear! torrentaldownpour here, with your review. :)

At first, I was confused. And it did continue throughout the story...but I got the situation sooner rather than later. I see you played with her emotions quite a bit, and that helped tremendously with the story line. But I got more confused at the end. Was it femmeslash? I kept seeing her and I in the same sentences and it got me confused. But at the end I saw it wasn't. ^_^

Just one grammar mistake I saw: "Somehow, he had seen me and was coming to grace me with a huge." I think hug should be replaced by "huge." ;)

9/10! Good job. :D
~lovelyinsane aka torrentaldownpour

Author's Response: Gosh, I can't believe you had to endure that awful story. It was just a spur of the moment thing I wrote about something in my life, bah!

Yeah, it could be confusing, for sure. But, I thank you so much for the review xD

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