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Review:Leigh Kelley says:
Addiction is such a terrible thing. People lose their limbs, their voices, hang on the edge of death and still can't give up on their cigarettes. Going a day without it is like going through a day without trying to breathe. Absolutely impossible. I think his addiction is something you've been trying to show with all the flashbacks? And even the first scene with Nev in chapter one touched on it. Having him go crazy because he doesn't have his comfort is absolutely plausible. Leaving his friend behind, while terrible, is absolutely believable. No one can stand between him and his cigarettes. No one. And it's already been four days. With the end in sight and a cig just waiting for him, just why would he stop? Yeah, you portrayed it all nicely.

Not much more for me to say here, so reading on.

~L. Kelley

Author's Response: It is, isn't it? This story was difficult for me to write for that reason. Clyde is so different from me and his values are so far away from what I believe, so having to live through him was hard. Having to BE him when he left his friend on the tracks for his cigarettes... it was hard. Thank you so much for your reviews. I really appreciate your feedback. =)

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