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Review:Leigh Kelley says:
Haha. There's just something amusing about Vandy taking that leap off the Sanity Express as well. Okay, maybe it's not so funny at all, considering how psycho she got. But, after reading the other chapters, she just seemed like the calmest one. For her to go off like that really puts things into perspective. She knows none of the people in that carriage. Has no one to talk to really. Made it an effort to snap at the only person I saw to have any interest in her. Being around them when she obviously had no want to, trapped with seemingly no hope at all... It's enough to send anyone crazy. I know I pretty much go crazy when the electricity goes because I can't stand just sitting in silence. And I pretty much crack when it's gone for most of the day. So imagine being pretty much alone for four days. Yeah, I'd go psycho on everyone too. She's almost like a calm before the storm. You described their emotions and the scene really well.

Vandy going through that window, or trying to anyway, was really chilling. I thought that she'd end up tipping the train and send them all crashing off the tracks. It was pretty scary, to say the least, especially with Clyde so calm about it all. Just sitting there, watching. And then just pulling her and laying her aside. I believe it. It's all about self-preservation and surviving. What kind of a connection does he have to the girl? Other than having been cooped up with her for four days? And she hasn't exactly been the nicest to him. It's not like Neville and Luna, where it was clear for most of the story that they care for each other. So to be honest, I didn't really feel bad when he left her behind. Cold of me, but she hadn't been the most likable of characters.

Now, I wonder if they are going to make it.

~L. Kelley.

Author's Response: When you think about it, it's not very funny. But I definitely understand how you could think it was funny. I thought it was kind of funny when I was writing it, and then I was just like, "Oh..." Thank you =)

I'm so glad you believed that part. It was sort of disturbing for me to write this part, when Clyde just sits by and watches as Vandy essentially kills herself, but it was how it had to be, you know?

Thank you so much! I hope you like the rest ^_^

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