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Review:Leigh Kelley says:
Vandy, Vandy, Vandy. Those words actually came out of sweet little Vandy's mouth? She really seems different from the Vandy we've heard about through his thoughts. I'm surprised she let them sit in the compartment with her if that's what she truly thought of him. Maybe it's because Luna and Neville were with him. Hm. It seems that she's wanted to tell him all of that for a long time. I am glad she said those things, because we get to see another side of Clyde.

Sometimes, characters like Luna and Neville do seem out of character. Luna doesn't seem very Luna, but she's pretty tough to write, so I can't really get on you for it.

Still curious as to where you're taking this. Every time I think something is going to happen, it doesn't. I can't guess to your plotline at all, but I suppose that's a good thing?

~L. Kelley

Author's Response: XD Oh, yes. Vandy's deceiving, isn't she? I'm so pleased to see how much you're thinking about this piece. That's the best compliment I could receive as a writer. ♥

Yes, Neville and Luna were a problem. They are very difficult to write, and I know that's no excuse, but I will have to practice more with their characters to get them right. Thanks.

It is a good thing, don't you think? =)

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