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Review:PenguinsWillReignSupreme says:
You. Are. Silly.
I shall repeat and repeat until you finally realise it because there is NO reason on this planet why this should ever be called unfit for human eyes or anything similar!

Snape/Lily is underwritten, especially on the unrequited Snapey side. Not a fan of full-blown not-James/Lily, I was a leetle skeptical but with no reason as it was...beautiful.

But the fading embers in the fire glow with the vivacity of her hair, and when they die they are the same shade as his.

By far and away, that was my favourite line. That or the last. It makes him...human and that's an element to Snape that is often foregone, I feel.

No dialogue, naturellement, was brilliant. It's amazing what a difference that can make to a piece and it really sets this off nicely.

Erm, no reason for you to EVER declare yourself jealous of my descriptions again with these. Your vocabulary is far wider than my own and you really work wonders with the words, twisting them and using them brilliantly.

Sooo...I really have little else to say other than to repeat that I think you're a delusional idiot with no capacity to see her own amazing ability, but who will surely call me a hypocrite as soon as she reads this.

ILY :P

xx

Author's Response: So. Are. You.
I CANNOT JUDGE MY OWN WORK, OKAY? Lol, I think everyone realises how difficult it is to be objective. Unfortunately, we err on the side of disaster.

Hahahaha, a lot of people are saying they're not fans, but I do not know why as Snape is LOVELY. Well, in a way :P. I can't quite understand how underwritten it is though, as the Snape/Lily parts throughout the series were some of the most beautiful, in my humble opinion.

"After all this time, Severus?"
"Always."
-Jane tears up-

I seem to be a person who manages to get one good line in a fic and people latch onto it. I'm rather lucky really, it blinds them from the rest :P.

I do love stories sans dialogue, they're always nice and prose-y.

NOW THAT IS RIDICULOUS. Your descriptions are absolutely amazing! And your vocabulary far outweighs mine, so we shall not hear any of this nonsense again.

We shall go off and be oblivious to the world together :P

Thank you for reading and reviewing, my love!

ILYTOO
xx


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