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Review:Eridanus says:
Right, so why did you not tell me yourself how incredible this is? You KNOW Teddrose is my ultimate favourite, you evil witch. Let me start by saying that you have, without doubt, put my attempts on the ship to shame. Every single time I read something new of yours it never ceases to amaze me how talented you are.

You did a wonderful job with Rose, you don't automatically love her but she's a grower and you can see where she's coming from. As a character she's astonishingly good and I really admire how you portray her. I adore Teddy and I wouldn't have his heart broken for the world, but I almost wanted her to just run away. I think the fact that she stays creates more love for her though, and, if not love, then definitely sympathy.

Your characterisation of Teddy was also beautiful. I felt awful for him when he proposed, and his ideas that he could change her or had changed her. When you contrasted his playful behaviour, before they were together, with his dependence on her it's really quite heart breaking. It's like neither of them can let go, but they're just hurting themselves and each other in the process.

You handled the flashbacks tremendously, (not that I would expect any less) and I thought it was a lovely way to show the growth of the relationship. The transitions into them were extremely smooth and it was all a really good fit.

Obviously description is mind numbingly gorgeous, and I am jealous of it to the extreme, as well as your wonderful use of grammar. Not an awkward sentence in sight, though I will credit Marina for that triumph. Not too sure on your skill level ;). BACK TO DESCRIPTION, God, I wish I could write it like you can... The fireworks display was a lovely setting to choose and it was incredibly well done in your part. Am I very far off the mark here, or was it supposed to symbolise their relationship? The excitement of the first sparks, the steady eruptions as the relationship goes on, until it fizzles out? No idea really, am pretending to be smart.

Well, this was extremely sad in the most amazing way possible, and I shall forever be in awe of you and your ability to be total win at my favourite ship! I hope you enjoyed this (rather serious XD) review from me, but nothing else could really do it justice.

Jane xx

Author's Response: I am wondering who on earth you are and what you have done with my dearest Jane: predominantly serious review :o

However, it is this: "Let me start by saying that you have, without doubt, put my attempts on the ship to shame" that makes me think that it is indeed you because YOU ARE BEING RIDICULOUS, WOMAN.
No-one could follow Collisions.
No-one.

Rose - am mildly proud of her since my hatred of her kind of ruled over the whole thing. If Marina can remind me of its original ending, am fairly sure that she would come off in a more negative light...

Seriousness is scaring me now, lovely...
I thought I'd have a lovely Teddy since I don't write him like that often (and when I do, he's usually having his heart broken) and gave him a BIT of a happy ending.

Flashbacks - they were HELL. Ask Marina. The last one especially caused me enormous issues.

Shut up. You have nothing to be jealous of.
AND JANE IS BACK! :P

You CAN, and more. There are not enough Bonfire Night settings out there and it's such a KEY PART OF THE UK! So much better than Hallowe'en.

o.O
That wasn't intentional but it could be. Subconscious in action and all that jazz. You, I'm afraid, are too clever for me.

The review, in all honesty, terrified me. Not just because it was scarily serious but because I thought you would hate it.

Thank you, though, put a smile on my face ^_^
♥
xx

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