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Review:Violet Gryfindor says:
That last line was utterly creepy. It opens the story up to so many different possibilities and makes me rethink Myrtle's ghost completely. Wow. What a perfect ending line! It suits the story because of Myrtle - for any other ghost (other than Peeves, who isn't a ghost in the first place) it would seem too light or comical, but Myrtle can't help being comical, even while she is also a tragic, pathetic figure.

I'll try not to write a whole review based on a single line of your story. Up to that line, I was caught up in your prose, which sounds beautiful - it flows, it's emotionally moving, and very poetic with alliteration and metaphors/similes, all combining to make for a brilliant one-shot. The ship alone fascinated me, and I'm still working my head around it - it's new and strange, but it makes sense in its own way, too.

Another fantastic story from you! I had to stalk you on TDA to find it, but I'm glad I did. It's always a pleasure to read your work. ^_^

Author's Response: Wow, Susan, I was so happy to see your review for this story! I'm very flattered, and I'm really happy that you especially liked the last line - that wasn't always the plan as I was writing this, and as I was about halfway through with it, I suddenly realized what direction I wanted to take it in.

The ship is strange, to say the very least! But I started to think that it might be somewhat plausible, depending on how it's handled.

Thanks for stalking! I always appreciate your reviews! ^_^

Melanie


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