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Review:Yoshi_Kitten says:
Ok, so I know this has been up for a while now, but I wanted to wait until the end to read & review it, this way I can review all the entries altogether now. Aw man, this is going to be a VERY tough contest to judge because all of the entries have been SO good!! And yours my dear is certainly no exception that cuz, as always, you have delivered a magnificent one-shot!!! I mean my gosh girl, this was REALLY good!! I thought it was a very nice one-shot, and I adored it from beginning to end!!

It was so interesting to read something from Dean's POV for a change. He isn't one that there are too many stories out there about, so I am glad you took that angle with this! And your use of description for Dean's perception of the battle was incredible! I actually had tears forming in my eyes as I was reading this through because of the way in which you have captured the emotion here Witness... It was awesome, simply breathtaking! And that ending was so incredibly sweet!! :)

I think my favorite part tho, was when she first called out his name and he saw here standing there with the flower in her hair. That whole paragraph was stunning and I loved it SO freaking much! Your writing captivates me every time... Oh geeze, I do realize that I sound like such a fan girl right now, lol! But that's because I really do love ALL of you works Witness!! Thank you so much for entering my challenge hun. Your entry was absolutely amazing, to say the least!! And like I said, this is gonna be a difficult one to judge!

Oh, and I STILL cannot believe that you just randomly picked Luna & Dean after talking about wanting to write about the two of them, lol! Was that not fate or what? And I also think this has an awesome story summary, and title as well by the way! You truly are amazing my dear, haha!! =)

This deserves a complete 10/10 for sure!!! Good luck hun!!

Author's Response: Hey Deana!!

This was such a fabulous review!! :) It was very ironic that I chose this pairing after talking with you about wanting to write them. Fate was looking out for me. lol.

I enjoyed writing from Dean's POV and am glad that you enjoyed his discription of the battle. I don't write dark stuff too often (as you well know *cough* fluffy Teddy *cough*) so I am thrilled that the emotion came through in this peice.

Luna is such a unique and wonderful character. I tried very hard to do her justice here. :) She's a tough cookie to portray well. It's reassuring to know that my description of her was satisfactory.

This was a fantastic challenge!! It was a fun one shot to write. :) Thanks so much for this review.

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