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Review:SnitchSnatcher says:
Since I'm not long-winded like you are, this review is going to be short and sweet. Because, let's face it, who doesn't like that?

Considering that I quite possibly one of the biggest, if not THE biggest Lily/James fan, I was quite surprised that I enjoyed this. But maybe it's because they didn't have interaction. Regardless, it was beautifully written and there were some really great lines that took my breath away. I would highlight them or put them in italics, but that would require me to open up another window and go to the story and highlight it and blah blah blah. So I'm going to say this: you have the gift of prose and for that, I am jealous. Truly and honestly jealous.

There are some phrases in here that are so beautifully worded, it kills me. When you described Snape's form as negligible. For some reason, when I read that, I was like, "WHOA. THAT IS THE PERFECT WORD." And then I continued on to the next point where my mind felt like it was ninja'ed or something.

Anyway, to make a review that was supposed to be short a little bit longer, I have no idea what you were talking about. This is hardly awful. If anything, it's amazing, one of the best things you've written. I love how the fire correlates with Lily's hair, ugh, I'm just jealous.

So I'm going to leave you with that, my dear. ILY!



Author's Response: You are so jealous of me. One day you will reach the levels of literacy that I have.

Hahahaha, that's definitely not a false claim, but I'm really glad that you enjoyed this regardless! LOL- and that is also very likely. I think it's a lot easier for people who don't like them as a ship to accept them when it's unrequited/it's just Snape being all woe is me. AND GO AWAY. You are one of my HPFF idols. You are forbidden from being jealous.

I think I just have chemistry on the brain. There is no other explanation for it :P. But it is WONDERFUL that you thought it was perfect, as I am not often hitting upon the right words XD. Hahahahaha, I HOPE that's a good thing.

I am a terrible judge of my own writing. I am extremely biased against myself, haha. But I DO take your reviews with a pinch of salt as you are too nice for words :P. JEALOUSY IS BANNED.

Thank you so much for readig and reviewing, lovely.


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