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Review:Reyes91 says:
I really enjoyed reading bits and pieces of Sirius' childhood. It had to be awful knowing his family. You depicted well (though I would have loved to read more about his childhood).

There is one little thing I have to pick on though. You were probably told this already, but I have yet to scan through your other reviews. Bellatrix was, in no way, close to Sirius' age. She was probably out of Hogwarts by the time he came in. They might be about eight or so years apart. But, since this story seems AU, changing the age to fit that memory works. So...go on and ignore my little nitpicking ;)

This was a wonderful chapter, dear. Onto the next!

-Reyes91

Author's Response: Urgh, I'm always discovering these little oversights that mess up the way my story fits with canon. Of course, this is definitely AU, so like you said it doesn't matter much. But you're right, I think I switched Bella and Andromeda's ages. =[

I'm glad you enjoyed reading the important moments in Sirius's childhood. I know I skipped around a lot, but I figured I had to, or this story would be a thousand chapters long. Thanks again for the review!


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