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Review:Anna_Black says:
As cute and nice as Ray can be, I feel like taking his head and putting it through a wall. Sorry Ray, I'm a die hard Sirius fan!

Ok, yes, true, he did wrong, but it was BEFORE they were together duh! So, one can only blame him from keeping it from Debbie, but come on! It's not like people have a list of ex'es which they give to their present girlfriends/boyfriends! Yes, I agree it makes a difference if that EX is your quasi-sister-in-law ... or something of the sort...

Point is, I like Sirius! And after all, I still root for him and Debbie. And Ray can go back being the friend. THE friend. That's it. THE friend... and Sirius can through a couple of Bludgers at him, but that's optional *angel face*

As for the PoVs, well I got so used to Debbie (she is so funny!!!), but I wouldn't mind alternating bewteen her and Sirius, as long we get inside her head often enough for me to burst out laughing at random bits.

Author's Response: Haaa! Woah thats some serious love for Sirius, poor Ray getting all the hassle! But yeah. THE friend... I'll take it on board! Just so no one's heads get put through no walls. And yeah, Dee's being a bit of a mug about it all. It's just that her brother was in love with Marlene (no matter what a psychobitch she was being) and Sirius not only ruined that for Freddie, but then knew that he had to keep it from Dee to have a chance with her so to her, he was lying the whole time. Anyway. Yeah. I'm still deciding about the POVs, there are mixed opinions. I think I'm going to have to see what people think of the first chapter of the sequel and go from there... but I thnk my writing will probably be better from Dee, I'm so used to her. And I'm glad it makes you laugh!
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