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Review:watchtherainfall says:
I have thoroughly enjoyed this story, feeling the pain for Molly and feeling the happiness for her, too. A character of not many words, I noticed, pretty much embodying the whole thing about actions speaking louder than words. The language you use also helps as you do not stick to the overused words like touched, look, etc but kissed, roaming, etc.

There are a couple grammar mistakes in the chapter, but nothing overly major. The flow is wonderful, and there are no mistakes what so ever in that part of the story. The way that you have written this story intrigues me as it is not something that you normally see a writer do. You are incredibly good at it too.

The plot was wonderful. Each situation, though short, played a prominent role in the story as a whole. There is nothing missing but there is nothing extra than what is needed, either. There are a few things that weave in and out of the story, playing a minor role to the main plot but resulting to be quite effective like the counting thing. It is really good!

Please feel free to re-request a review for any of your other stories. Your writing intrigues me, and I thank you for requesting a review for such a good story! It was really easy to review something so different, so good.

Author's Response: thank you so much for the feedback, I REALLY REALLY appreciate it! *hugs*

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