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Review:watchtherainfall says:
This story is wonderful, I have to say. The details, the insight in to the love that Molly has for Teddy despite no actual dialogue happening. Some people say that no dialogue can get boring but seeing as the snippets in to Mollys life are so short, yet so full of thought and descript, it does not bore me in the slightest. The details, as with the last couple chapters, are perfect. It is not too much and is not too little.

I love Molly as a character. Unlike the cliche of her being a prude, rule abiding girl like her father is far too overused. It is like a breath of fresh air in a character. The writing itself is also a breath of fresh air. The tense in which you write in is rare, and it is also even a rarer find for it to actually work. I feel horrible for Molly, not getting what she wants, but the language used to end the chapter is too wonderful to pass up. I would rather that than a happy ending, sadly.

There are very few grammatical and punctual mistakes in this chapter, and the flow is smoother. It is a wonderful read.

Author's Response: thank you ever so much, it really means a lot to me that you enjoyed it!

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