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Review:kandekisses says:
CHELSEA!!

You keep amazing me, you really really do. *wipes tear away*
That was so beautiful! From the very beginning I was hooked. Your descriptions are amazingly good. I could picture the painting in the beginning perfectly and I so wish it was real.

Her mother was adoringly cute. Trying to keep the whole surprise secret and all. &I have to say, while reading and the subtle little hints I did guess right about what the surprise was. But that still didn't keep me from smiling and day dreaming that one day my boyfriend would do the exact same thing lol.

I loved when you switched the POV and you showed how nervous James was. &Then their conversation. &How they mentioned Harry. Brilliant!

Oh &I loved when he called her Lily Flower =)

Yup in case you didn't know yet, this one-shot is going in my favorites. It was perfect! When I need a smile I'll come back to read it again.

Very nicely done!

Author's Response: *squeels and smothers in a hug*

Yay I am so glad you like it!! I know, after a couple years with my boyfriend, Im going to make him read this and say "be just as romantic as James or else" lol. Just kidding, but still it really flattered me when you made that comment.

I am actually glad you guessed the suprise, because you had to anticipate it! Heehee ^_^

I am glad you liked the part about Harry! I put it in as an afterthought but I am so glad that I did!

And whenever I need to smile I am going to read this freaking review because I was smiling so hard when I read it I thought my cheeks were going to fall off! lol

Thanks so much! I lurv you!
~~Chelsea

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