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Review:Alopex says:
Hahahaha! This is one of the most hilarious things I have ever read! I'm sure you know which parts are the most hilarious, but I'll point some out anyway. Obviously, Harry repeating the words he wasn't supposed to repeat was very funny. James dashing after him and thinking the broom shouldn't go so fast was rather funny as well. Lily nearly roping him into writing thank-you notes (he should have quite while he was ahead). The bit with the cat of course was funny. The whole thing was funny.

Well, there were a few serious moments. For instance, the bit about Lily keeping the vase from Petunia. The references both Lily and James made to being hidden inside. It was obvious that it was affecting them, though they tried to laugh it off and cover it up with jokes. Harry was the only one oblivious, since he was having the time of his life. What a little imp you made him out to be--an absolutely adorable imp, but an imp nevertheless.

Author's Response: Thanks for this review! I giggled quite a lot when I was writing this fic.

I'm sort of amazed there aren't more one-shots about Harry's first broomstick ride. When I read the line in Lily's letter about how Harry nearly killed the cat, the obvious question was, "Good lord, what kind of craziness was going on?" And this fic sprung from that question. :-)

I loved writing baby Harry - that's something that's also not done often enough! Little kids are really fun to write.

Thanks for your review!

Melanie


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