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Review:Ivy says:
I've been reading your story so far. It's pretty good. I really like it and the banner too.
But i think your fiction still needs something, "depth" i suppose.
The character's mood needs more descriptions and to be shown.
Anyway, that's just my comment, otherwise, your story is very interesting.
Well, now i'm gonna moving to the next chapter.
Thanks a lot.

Ivy.

Author's Response: Thx for ur review. I'm glad u like it. And this is my first fic and while I think the idea was oaky, my writing definitely needs some improvement. It's something I'm working on and I hope I'll get there eventually.

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