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Review:Ronsgirl29 says:
I liked this! But it feels very rushed, you should slow down and explain this better. like on second shes making a patronus and the next shes running away crying about her and potter being soulmates, and then he snogs her! its all too much in a short space. but i actually enjoyed this. Your slightly hectic writing style adds to lily's characterization and makes it funny! so i'll keep reading if you update! (which you should because the only way to get better is to practice!)

Author's Response: hey! thanks for the advice... most people think 'oh no...if i criticize her maybe she'll get upset'.
nope not me

i really do appreciate it. i was just about to give up on this story but seeing as you left me 2 reviews, i will continue. ill keep your tips in mind.

thanks for reading and reviewing!


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