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Review:Eridanus says:
Oh no! I just wrote this review and clicked away without submitting, so I shall have to rewrite it :P.

Anyway, I realise that this may sound bizarre, but that portion of HBP where you picked the quote from is one of my favourite moments in the whole series. To me, it showed that even in the face of all this heartbreak and devastation, love still exists and it's one thing that cannot be defeated.

Once again, I thought this chapter was fabulous and I'm very intrigued as to where you're taking the story! It's got so much potential and you're completely fulfilling it, but I can't even begin to fathom how you're going to continue. It's all so wonderful and mysterious.

Character-wise everything was absolute perfection. It seemed like a missing moment that could just be slipped straight into canon! I especially admire your Luna, she wasn't in it for long, but her characterisation was entirely spot on, as were Bill and Fleur's, so well done!

I find this subject absolutely fascinating and your narration in this was beautiful. Definitely very Fleur.

I enjoyed this immensely! I hope you have a wonderful holiday season and a Merry Christmas! ^_^

Author's Response: Aww, I always get a little bit put out when I write a review and it disappears. It's so disheartening :P.

That's one of my favorite parts, too, that Fleur can see past it all. While I was sitting down to start writing this chapter, I thought of that HBP quote and thought it would kind of go with my Fleur and her determination to beat down the Veela instinct.

GAH, Luna is so hard to keep in character! I know she's a bit different, but I never know if I've got too little of it or if I'm going overboard.

Thanks so much, once again! Merry Belated Christmas, and Happy New Year!


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