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Review:Eridanus says:
Merry Christmas, Sami, it's me again :P! I'm here with another review for you for TGS's Secret Santa Gift Exchange ^_^.

Wow! I absolutely ADORED this. It's such a fantastically original idea and I can't help but marvel at how you've come up with it. I know there's a difficult side to being a Veela, but hardly anyone deals with it, and they way you have is just beyond fantastic. I never even considered how much something 'ugly' would bother them, but it's SO plausible.

I also love this take on Fleur. It creates so much sympathy for her character, and it really shows her strength for still wanting to be with Bill after he was attacked. It's clear that Fleur is a strong woman, but this story just makes my respect for her mount even more.

First person really seems to suit you and this chapter had just the right amount of angst and explanation. This could so easily have slipped into a situation where she just seems vain, but you wrote it so well that it doesn't even cross the reader's mind.

I'm absolutely hooked on this story and the originality is truly astounding, never mind that I really love Fleur XD.

Wonderful start and MERRY CHRISTMAS!

Jane xx

Author's Response: Hey again, Jane!

Gosh, I never know what to say when I get such positive reviews xD. Besides, you know, THANKS. I'm flattered you say first person suits me, because it's actually going outside my comfort zone. I'm so used to third person that I wasn't sure if this came off as forced or not.


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