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Review:FannyPrice says:
I loved it! I adore Lily/James above all else, and this was just so wonderful! It's well-written, and I really enjoyed the part from James POV.
Favorite lines:
"She was radiating light, whether because of her personality or because I thought of her as my own personal sun, I didnít know."
"I would say that there were butterflies in my stomach, but that would have been a horrendous lie. From the way it felt, it must have been bats at least, flapping their wings around in there."
I realize that this is supposed to be a light-hearted piece, so it no big deal but, out of curiosity, what happened to the war?
That last one made me chuckle.
I also think you've captured people in love really well. Anyway, highly enjoyable read!

Author's Response: Hey! Thanks so much for the review!!! I am so glad you liked it!!

Yes, the war well... *hides face in shame* I know the war is technically going on, but it was too hard to fit in to the noontime challenge thing, and I wanted it to be centered on their engagement, not morbid war stuff. I took the cowards way out by not mentioning it basically hehe.
Thanks so much for reviewing! It means a lot!

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