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Review:padme_alejandra says:
So sorry for the delay in reading/reviewing! School has forced me to get behind in my writing and prevented me entirely from reading. But it's finally the holidays now and I intend to catch up on everything, and this was at the top of my list. For good reason, apparently, as this was absolutely amazing.

Sarah and Rose are such wonderfully developed characters and therefore a pleasure to read. Their dialogue/banter is really amusing to read and it moves the chapter along splendidly. Poor Rose's self-consciousness is something everyone can relate to, as is Sarah's quirkiness. I really like that you've injected flaws (or what society perceives as flaws) into your characters. It adds a really real element that just makes the story better as a whole!

Scorpius is looking even more suspicious; I'm excited to see where that goes! Hopefully he'll play a big part in the story as I have fallen in love with him :)

Oooh, Albus has figured it out?!?! Gah, I can't wait to see what he's come up with and whether he's right or not.

This is just such an incredibly original, refreshing plot and I can't tell you how much I enjoy it! I know I've said it before, but you write beautifully and it makes these chapters absolutely fly by and leave me anxious for the next chapter.

Keep up the brilliant work! 10/10.

Author's Response: *smacks self over head repeatedly*

The explanation for the disgustingly long wait for a reply is as follows: I had no updates and therefore avoided HPFF so I could avoid feeling guilty.

Thank yuo so much for this though, it really means a lot. I'm so glad you like the characters and, yes, Scorpius is looking incredibly suspicious, isn't he? I hope you continue to enjoy this. The next chapter's giving me trouble but hopefully it will be up soon. Thanks again, really.

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