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Review:_xDraco says:
i liked it. alot. :)
you managed to make it really fast paced, but it still flowed nicely :)

'The intimacy of such a gesture spoke louder than the three forbidden words you couldn't say, and you felt a smile tug your lips as your stomach fluttered with an emotion you weren't entirely ready to identify.' - definately my favourite sentance

oh, i also liked the fact that it was written in the second-person. this was the first story i've read that was written in it. :) :)

second chapter, maybe? (yn)

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it, thanks for reading! That line you quoted is one of my favourites from this too :)

Second person is a lot of fun to write, I do enjoy it. Thanks again for reading and for reviewing, I'm glad you enjoyed it! As for now, there will be no second chapter but maybe sometime in the future :)


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