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Review:Dmali says:
ok so i've done my end , please do yours, keep writing. i know what it's like with your first story. i just posted my first on here as well. it's called the flood. let me tell u tho. i enjoyed it. the mix of emotions. hermione's confession. only problem i have is that the chapter ended. i really hope that u develop this story and that u continue writing. ur writing shows talent and creativity. insert some commas tho so that it reads better. hope to see more from u.
dmali

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the kind words and constructive criticism. I will definitely take your advice to hand.

I really do want to continue with this fic but I'm having trouble seeing where I could take it. I've got an idea or two but I'll have to mull them over for a bit to see if they'd be worth writing about.

Thank you again for the review. : )


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