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Review:long_live_luna_bellatrix says:
Hi there! This was a great one shot; I totally forgot what it was based on until you mentioned Hugo bringing Miriam into the stable. You connected the two tales well, and the last sentence was absolutely perfect. I'm not a very religious person myself, but I enjoyed your story. You brought everything together, down to the tiniest details, seamlessly.

I was a little aprehensive when I saw how long this was, but I quickly forgot about the length. Hugo was a good, realistic character, and I liked your descriptions of his family traditions. The name out of a hat present giving was genius, and Hugo's morals at the end of the story were very true.

I found some minor grammar mistakes here and there, but other than that it was great. Very sweet, nice, and just in time for the holidays.

~lllb

Author's Response: Hello! Sorry for the long delay in responding. Life's been quite hectic and reviews got away from me a bit.

I'm very happy that you enjoyed this oneshot. I was hoping that the reader would become engrossed in the story and forget the cheesy immatation of the christmas story underlying the entire story. It is jaw-dropping to hear praise for my haphazzard combination of the two worlds.

I was very nervous about the length of this story. I'm glad that it was enjoyable enough not to notice. I'll be sure to look for the grammar mistakes and clean it up.

Merry Christmas and thanks for the review!
Melissa

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