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Review:Leigh Kelley says:
Well, this chapter was necessary, and it's good that it surrounded just the guys alone. Even under the influence James can't relent, no matter how hard Sirius is trying to get him to. Sirius really is apologetic, but James is acting so...womanly. What the the hands perched on his hips, the sniffing and other things. Haha. He needs to let it go, and I hope it's before he and Lily maybe work out their feelings. Because, I'd hate for that to be the only reason he forgives one of his best mates.

This chapter was amusing too. I think I'm more like Peter, even if I haven't done it in so long. Giggling a bit then falling asleep is what I've heard I'm like in that state. I'd hate to be like James, or have someone around me who is like James, that is. Punishing me in a dangerous sort of way for my past transgressions just seems pretty scary.

But anyway, glad they got to argue it out a bit, as one-sided as it is. James got his revenge, but I think now Sirius may just be mad again. It's sad to watch them like this, but it is nice (or should I say realistic) to see even the best of friends fighting.

Onward then. Despite my prior hesitation because of it not being completely canon, I'm getting addicted to this story. It has everything to do with your writing, and a nice plot. Definitely :).

~L. Kelley

Author's Response: James is usually so macho, I couldn't help but throw in some of his feminine side for laughs through his drunk alter ego. I hope I didn't take it too far...I would hate to emasculate one of my favorite examples of masculinity =P

Thank you so much! I'm glad that it is addictive and you are enjoying it. I am enjoying your thorough reviews - it is very nice to read your responses and see that you understand where I'm coming from exactly.

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