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Review:Leigh Kelley says:
Ah, so he isn't dead. Wonder what will happen now that he's still alive.

So basically, these wolves have no idea about the wizarding world? I thought they still knew, and just happened to not have wands. I'm getting more confused by the minute, and I know there's some bigger picture I'm not yet seeing, but I'm sure that is the way you rather it be. That everything will be revealed eventually, but I'm getting excited. I want it all now, haha, so that goes to show you how good your story is so far.

Memory charms. Why does he want to keep them so much in the dark?

An error.
"Are we looking for stuff on Dwayne?" I asked. - You switched to first person. Minor, but still somewhat distracting.
Also, you mention Raul lunging at JP. Isn't he currently unmoving in the infirmary?

Aside from that, I'm still enjoying this. Reading on.

~L. Kelley

Author's Response: I'm beginning to think I should add a quick piece in an earlier chapter to prove that they don't know anything of the wizarding world. I don't want you to have to keep on revising your thoughts.

Thanks for finding those mistakess; gosh, I really forgot where one of my characters was?!?!?


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