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Review:Leigh Kelley says:
Well, this is getting more exciting, and in the process, confusing. Never thought that the master was just a regular wizard. Thought he was more like Remus; a half-breed wizard. So he's not even a werewolf? Makes me more curious as to how and why he's reigning over a group of werewolves. What's about to happen? What is the Academy's purpose? Lots of questions, and so few answers, but that's good. No need to have everything revealed yet, or for someone to already guess to your plot.

I'm glad to see that there are some who don't like all the senseless killing, as is seen through Kiara. I'm pleased to see that they are somewhat affected by Thanos's death, even if I'm still not happy that he died.

The end of this was sad, especially with how Thanos's body was described. To know that it's just left out there to rot, or be eaten, is just...heart-breaking. The Academy really has no care about these people, aside from their purpose which I'm still not clear on as of yet.

Huh. They may have parents, eh? Seems more likely than anything else, and it raises even more questions. Where do they come from? Are they just snatched away when they are too tiny to remember anything else? I find it unlikely that they are manufactured. Ugh, I don't know what to make of this yet, so I'll just continue on.

~L. Kelley

Author's Response: This is the most mysterious thing I've ever written, and I constantly wonder if I'm giving too much or not enough info to the reader. I hope I've found a good balance.

The purpose of the Academy... That won't be revealed for a long time, I'm afraid, but it will come.

Yes, they have parents. Somewhere. Dun dun dun. :p

Thanks for the review!


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