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Review:Leigh Kelley says:
Interesting. Never thought that they might have classes, but it makes sense. It is an Academy after all. I guess I was just under the impression that all they did was hunt, and when they weren't hunting animals, they were sometimes killing each other. I wonder why all this killing is allowed to happen though. I thought it would be more of a brotherhood. It seems though that once someone angers you enough, you're allowed to fight them and possibly kill, if it came to that. It's just accepted with no repercussions. Why? It may by default weed out the weak, but it sort of dwindles the numbers as well.

Arnulf seems interesting. The bit at the beginning was a bit disgusting, but that's just me and my aversion to cockroaches that has me wrinkling my nose. He seems out of order though. Attacking his should-be friend for copying his answers. But I guess that's one of the things drilled into them. Attack, defend, don't allow others to take advantage. I like how it wasn't left at that though, and Blake came back to get his attacks in as well. Cowardly to attack him while he's asleep, but I guess that doesn't matter much to this munch.

You have a knack for writing action. I saw that in the first chapter, and again in this one. I felt like I was right there while the fight was going on, thanks to your descriptions, and I definitely enjoyed it. Good job.

~L. Kelley

Author's Response: I imagine it that the Master bred the kids to be vicious, and when killing broke out he encouraged it; it would keep people on their toes and hone their fighting skills like nothing else. Perhaps the Master didn't intend for people to kill quite so much, but it really was just a way of life for the kids.

As for action; I really didn't like writing it much; it just gets repetitive after a while, you know? I'm pleased you thought it was good. Thanks for the review!

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