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Review:Leigh Kelley says:
Hi :). So, the reason I hadn't reviewed this story at first, was because I was waiting for responses to my reviews on the first story you requested. Either way, I'll review your story now.

I liked this. The description was very good, just enough to set up a proper scene. I could picture everything clearly through the words you used, especially in the first paragraph.

I also think you have a very unique idea going here. I certainly haven't run across a story with a werewolf academy. It seems you have everything laid out already, and that's a necessary thing when working with something this original.

It definitely seems to me like the students are somewhat...trained into acting a certain way. I got it from this line They just knew, the way blood was good and fighting was good but cooked meat was bad. It's as if nothing else matters aside what the Master tells them, as if they have no proper thought processes of their own. Thanos seems to have a different idea, but doesn't say anything out of what I would term fear. Are those who don't do and act how they are trained, punished?

I have to question Thanos's decision to try and steal Dwayne's prey. If he knows the boy to be vicious, and knows that he has already killed six people (which you say is large because of the small number of kids), it's completely reckless to take something from him. Thanos, and what I have gotten of his personality so far, just doesn't seem like the type.

Anyway. It was a good chapter. I enjoyed it, aside from Thanos meeting his end, but I admire a writer who can kill a character so easily. I hope I'll get to see more of Dwayne in future chapters.

~L. Kelley

Author's Response: Hi! Oh wow, I'm sorry about the review responding! I have these phases where I completely blank out on responding, then go back and get them later. I apologize, I'll go respond now. And thanks for reviewing despite that! I would've totally understood if you hadn't reviewed until I'd responded to your others.

Your point on Thanos is excellent, and I'll definitely edit in. something. that will make it more realistic. I'm not sure what yet, but I reallly appreciate the help!

I started this story a while ago, and although I knew exactly what was going to happen, I think I did most of my planning in my head. Because I abandoned the story for a few months, then got my spark back and continued it, and I'm having trouble filling in the plot! Thanks for the review, and again, apologies for not responding to your others! I know how maddening it is to have requestors not read your rules; I guess I just lost track of my responses. :)


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