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Review:lovelyinsane says:
Hi there! So sorry this review took, wow, one month! =X NaNo has taken it's tole on me...anyway here it goes!

I really liked it. At first, I was skeptical as to what would happen, but then when you went to Teddy and Victorie's wedding, it was kind of predictable but in a good way. The characterization that you give Dominique is really good, and I like the way you play with her emotions. She sounds like a love-crazed teenager, like every girl around that age.

In your request, you wondered about the description. I think there is less dialogue, which can be good or bad in some situations. I think in this it was good, because like I said before, you played with her emotions and added enough dialogue to not make it too boring.

Thank you for requesting this, and sorry again for taking so long! I loved it, a very good read! Great ship too, never thought of them.

-lovelyinsane aka torrentaldownpour :D

Author's Response: thanks so much :) and a thanks to you for considering my challenge!!
I'm so glad you liked the story. Yeah your right Dom does seem like love-crazed, doesn't she? But you're also right that she should. Aren't we all? :)
thanks again!

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