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Review:Bee says:
Wow. I cannot believe you killed Toren. I thought for sure he would be the main character that would stick around long enough. Only enough he was the only member of the Watch that I liked. Your chapters that deal with the politics of the Chancery I find to be more interesting than with the chapters of the resistance.
However this chapter was interesting because it gave more detail into the past. When Harry died though why did everyone turn to Albus and not James? Is that why James founded the resistance because he was jealous? I have feeling everything isnt as black and white as 409 and Toren made it sound. However I love how your story is unfloding and I cannot wait for more chapters.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for this great review! I am glad you liked the story, despite my killing Toren! Bwahaha, it had to happen. He was begging for it. But rest assured that though Toren may be dead in the ditch, his story is far from over and will be told through the voices of others. His character still has a long way to go and hopefully, I will do him justice by not botching up his story.

As for the politics, I am glad you like it. It's an unexpected surprise actually as I thought that that would be the part to bore people to death. It's nice to know some people actually look forward to it. But the resistance must be discussed. Two sides of the coin and all that. But worry not, some time in the subsequent chapters, the two worlds will collide.

As for James' and Albus's motives, well right now it is up for your interpretation but it will be explained. I promise.

Once again, I am glad you like my work and I really appreciate this review!

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