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Review:Skypaw says:
Many of your sentences take a while to decipher.
The paragraph about Albus' heart growing larger isn't clear enough for me to interpret a definite meaning.
I still don't understand the flying in the face of fate question.
the metaphors in this were quite beautiful.
I commend you for your imagery as well.
Things are crystal clear again until you mention Albus preferring the butterfly. Things are slightly confusing after that, but the whole effect is quite poetic.

Author's Response: This is definitely one of my more poetic, obscure, confusing pieces. I'm generally more of a straight-shooter, so I wanted to be a little more cryptic - I felt it fit Dumbledore's character.

Thank you for the review! I appreciate your comments.

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