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Review:WitnesstoitAll says:
Oh my goodness. This was a wonderfully poignant little song fic. The descritption was beautiful and distant... quite appropriate for Andromeda's place in life. Her angle on Frank and Alice's torture was quite unique.

Andromeda has always been one of my favourite minor characters. She is so layered and complicated. I feel that you captured this complexity in this wonderful story.

The last part, the part about Andromeda sitting and rocking Teddy, warmed my heart. Despite everything that she had lost through her life, she did have a tiny little life to tend for. Perhaps in this new life she can right the wrongs she didn't know to right earlier in her life.

Wonderful imagery and description. I'm sorry if I'm not making any sense. How this story made me feel is just beyond my vernacular ability to describe.

-Melissa

Author's Response: Melissa, I can't thank you enough for your reviews. As a new-ish author on this site it just warms the cockles of my heart to get even one unsolicted review or feedback, and you've been amazing =)

Andromeda is a fascinating character really, and it was fun to write her (espesh as I was supposed to be studying hard)

Andromeda's relation to Alice and Frank is obscure here, but will make more sense when the sequel of Ripples - about the second generation, Andromeda Black, Dorcas Meadowes.. etc.. gets out.

I felt the fic really needed the hope at the end - otherwise its just too heavy and tragic.

Thanks again!


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