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Review:SnitchSnatcher says:
Dear Lord, I feel sorry for Molly. I really do, and not because she walked/witnessed the love of her life snogging her all-too-perfect cousin. This girl is putting herself through the emotional wringer, chasing after him. Though I wouldn't call it chasing since she is quite patient and assured that, eventually, he will be hers, which in itself is quite adorable.

I think my favourite line from this chapter was:
Instead she cries on the inside, a small tear falling from the hole in her heart as she tries to look away. She does not cry because she knows there is no hope to destroy, no dreams to shatter.

There's something so...well, disarming, almost in that line. For a brief moment, you think that Molly is going to keep on keeping on, but alas, she resigns to the fact that they won't be together. However, I AM glad that in the last few lines, she regains that confidence that makes her oh-so-Molly and endearing. I'm rooting for her!

XOXOXO,
Molly

Author's Response: I ADORE YOU *hugs*

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