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Review:theelderwand says:
I love Pre-Hogswarts tales like this. Even when they're light-hearted and happy, they still have that sad aire to them, tho.

There's some really great stuff in here. Especially Harry's new word; I mean the one before Quidditch! And both Lily's and James reactions were priceless. I especially liked the interplay between James and Lily. My favorite line, tho, has to be:

"One out of two isn't bad," he whispered to Harry. "You can have another go at the cat tomorrow."

Harry placed a hand on James' cheek.

"Daddy."

We aren't given a lot to work with as far as JKR's characterizations of Jame and Lily, but I loved what you did with them, and with Harry.

Your writing is tight, gramatical and expressive.

Excellent work here.

Author's Response: Very true - almost everything involving James and Lily has a bittersweet air about it, because you know exactly what's coming for them. I think I even capitalized on that a bit in this fic, with James promising to teach Harry how to play Quidditch. Sigh. So sad...!

Thanks so much for the review! This is one of my favorite stories among my older works, and I'm glad to hear you enjoyed it!

Melanie


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