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Review:Jane_Volturi says:
Hi *hugs*
I'm really sorry that it's taken me so long to read and review this amazing piece of writing. Really, when I handed you this cliche I wasn't expecting it to be this good. Mary Sues are usually very hard to make original but you did an amazing job. I really like Lindsey's character, sure she was a little mary-suish but you did exactly what I asked; you took the cliche, made it into something completley original and I really enjoyed reading it.
I also enjoy the fact that you didn't go for the boring trio theme or the marauders theme, you chose Fred, George and Umbridge as your main characters and I really love how you characterized them. They were all in character and they all contributed evenly to the plot.
As far as this challenge goes this fanfiction is definitley my favourite so far, the writing was amazing as well, I'm actually quite jealous lol.
10/10
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Author's Response: Aw, thank you so much! I didn't expect such praises! I'm glad you like Lindsey; she was a spur of the moment character and I wanted to show that yes, the cliche was in play but it wasn't the entire point of the story. Personally, anything to do with Fred & George is absolute love. Umbridge is just, by far, the perfect villain - so, they sort of stole the story.

I'm really happy that I managed to keep everyone in character - that was really important to me.

Again, thank you SO MUCH for the praise and for offering such an amazing challenge. I had a lot of fun writing it ^_^ ♥


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