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Review:Rose_Weasley123 says:
Oh my god Rin, that was amazing! Seriously, I don't read enough of your work.

Everytime I read something you write, I am struck by how lyrically and beautifully you write your descriptions. Unlike some writers, you strike the righ balance between full on description and nothing. The description doesn't come and smack you in the face, but sits and waits for you to notice it. I'm not sure that made sense, but the point is it's rich with being overpowering.

You have a really soft, elegant style too. Everything just melts and flows together. It's seamless. I also like how you have to dig in your stories. Sometimes the meaning isn't right on the surface, but you have to go deeper. I love the way you use repetition to make a point and tie everything together. It's really readable too.

I loved the repetition and variations of the word empty. It gave everything an extra quality, tense and slightly claustrophobic. It created a lovely contrast between your said soft writing style.

I love the voice of the narrator. Lily comes right out of the pages and apeaks to you in a distinctive voice. What appears to tell so little actually tells so much.

The actual story. How do I even begin on the actual story? It's so open to interpretation. I can't settle on what I think happened, although the beautiful thing is that everything seems to fit in. I'd love to hear what your idea was.

I love the one line of dialogue at the end. It just gives it one last punch. The line holds so much impact as it is the only one in the whole story.

Oh, everything was just so beautiful! I could honestly go on squeeing about this all day (but I can't. Unfortunately, I have homework to do :)) I feel so useless. There is honestly no critique I can offer you. Bottom line, it was amazing.

-Becca

Author's Response: OmiGOD, Becca, you are just... amazing. Truly lovely, wonderful, amazing.

I really don't know what to say. I appreciate the review more than you probably know, seeing as my writing esteem has been kind of low as of late. This just... cheered me right up. Gah. You're amazing.



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