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Review:hermioneism says:
Hi! I really enjoy this story so far. I love that Lily is in Slytherin, I think that is a nice twist. I also really enjoy your characterizations. It is a believable story. I can see Hogwarts being divided rather than united after the War, so that is another believable aspect.

One thing that did make me pause and distracted me, though, is the Oliver Abbot bit. I like that you are discussing secondary characters, but if you are trying to stay as close to canon as possible (which it seems you are)... Hannah Abbot marries Neville Longbottom in canon and Hannah runs the Leaky Cauldron (I guess she could write a column on the side...)... so wouldn't their son be Oliver LONGBOTTOM, not Abbot? I could see a Longbotton in Hufflepuff.

Other than that little quirk, I love it! Looking forward to the next chapter. :)

Author's Response: Hi, i'm happy you like my story :)
Ohh! I completely forgot about that! I'll make sure to change that asap. Thanks for poiting it out, by the way! I might just change the name to something completely different.
Thanks for the review!
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