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Review:Rose_Weasley123 says:
Hey Georgia!

I must admit, I'm just a little bit of a closet Draco?Harry fan. Lets just call it Drarry for now :P. I've read a lot fo them, but I think this one might just be my all time favourite of them.

It's so easy to slip into tired old cliches, or make it far too OOC it's ridiculous, but somehow this felt all perfectly in canon. I don't quite know what you did. It might be the beautiful characterization or the pretty much believeable plot (I'll come to that in a second) that made it so amazing.

Your description amazes me. You have some beautiful lines, and you set the scene so well. I don't have favourite lines, I like it ALL.

The characterization seemed in canon, and they were all true to the books (which is very hard, as I'm discovering at the moment).

Perhaps a little CC- it didn't feel quite believeable when they started kissing suddenly. I think you could play around a little more with that scene. But really, I like it as it is.

I don't know why I continue to be amazed by you. Everyone knows you are amazing. End of.

10/10. :)

Author's Response: Becca, you are far too lovely XD

Thank you so much! I really am so pleased to hear that you liked this! It's my first Draco/Harry (I, too, am a closet fan!) so I'm really happy to hear such compliments!

I'm happy for the canon-ness; Draco/Harry can easily turn into girl-ish nonsense...okay, this is basically girl-ish nonsense, but whatever :P

I'm always floored when people comment on my description positively - it's a point I'm not at all confident with, so it's heartening to see!

By "suddenly kissing", do you mean the opening? Because that was supposed to be a mid-moment sort of opening. I'll see what I can do.

Thanks so much, Becca, for the lovely review. I'm so flattered, thanks!


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