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Review:Leigh Kelley says:
And here's the last one.

I don't picture Oliver as much of a drinker, but I can definitely see how this situation would warrant something with a kick. Anything to mentally prepare him for having to stay in that room, and share a room with Cody. I don't know what Hipshook was thinking. Even if the place was up to standards once upon a time, and even if the owner is an old friend, you would have still expected him to at least check the conditions before booking rooms, especially with the day they would have ahead of them. Maybe his lack of judgment has something to do with his mind not being in the right place. I don't know, but it was poor thinking on his part. Had the desired effect, though.

Oliver is such a gentleman. Cody offering to share the bed is nice of her, and he cockroach was just what he needed to accept. Not sure why she got upset when he called her an ugly pig though. She did squish her face up that way, and I'm sure he was only joking.

Nice chapter, and nice story overall. At first I thought you were going too fast and would have them jump into a relationship right off the bat, but I'm glad to see that it slowed down somewhat. Being friends is something they should consider first off, especially since they are on the same team together. Good job with that.

Keep it up.

~L. Kelley

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