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Review:hallowsorhorcruxes says:
:) It was brilliant.

I like your OC, Amalia. She's very much two-sided, and it's awesome that you managed to develop her character in such a short amount of time. I sympathize with her a bit, actually, and her weariness yet vulnerability together is so interesting.

I was a bit worried starting off the story, to be honest, because it seemed that Roger was not as complex as Amalia. I was secretly rooting for Amalia to completely ignore him. As I kept reading, through, his conversation with Amalia showed that he's hiding behind a mask also. It just so happens that his mask is the very opposite of Amalia's.

10/10! Thanks for posting, cheers-
Hallows

Author's Response: I'm actually really really happy with how Amalia turned out, and I'm so so sooo glad that you appreciate her as much as I do. I hope I did her character justice :] And yes! You understood the whole mask/no mask secret comparison. They compliment each other, because they are hiding from the opposite things in societ ;] It makes me smile to know you liked it so much! thanks for the rating and wonderful review!

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