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Review:padme_alejandra says:
Another lovely chapter.

Your writing continues to astound me, particularly the bits about inert pigeons and the 'pyjama party'. It's seemingly simple statements like that that really hook me. I quite liked it.

Hahaha, the conversation with Lavinia and the other ladies was quite funny. "Glad I could make it." XD Poor Freddy!

Hm, Crane certainly favours her considerably. I can't help but wonder at it. I mean, I certainly adore Freddy but I wonder if his attention has any other motivation. I dunno. Anyway! Haha.

I absolutely devoured this chapter. I couldn't believe I was done when I got to the end! Great work, keep it up!


Aw, I'm sad to hear you were so sick! I hope you're feeling better! It's no fun being sick.

Author's Response: Hey episkey!
Aww, thanks so much for the fantastic review! I'm so thrilled that you still find this story interesting after soldiering through the rather long-winded "Consumed". ^_^ As always, your feedback was so very helpful. I honestly can't thank you enough!

I'm so glad you enjoyed Freddy's conversation with Lavinia--I was worried that it might turn out too "Mean Girl"-ish, which certainly wasn't my intention. ;)

And yes, Crane is certainly playing favorites. I'd love to say more about his motivations, but I dare not ruin the plot. :)

Again, thanks so much for taking the time to review, episkey! It was wonderful hearing from you. Take care!

Lee Anne

PS And thanks! I'm feeling much, much better. ^_^

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