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Review:Black Mirror says:
Intriguing. Teddy seems to idolize Vic to a point of can-do-no-wrong, while Dom was brave enough as a child to stand by him and he basically sees her as trash. I liked the scene with Dom and friends a lot, especially the comment on Garland. Provided Teddy learns to appreciate her more, and she stays independent and sarcastic while still growing up a bit, I hope they end up together.

Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter!

Yes, Dom's friends just came to me while writing (as well as most of the plot) I think they are pretty real hahha and the Garland comment is great to write in.

We'll see some more Teddy's POV in the next chapter and more on Dom, but yes he does idolize Vic and doesn't realize what a friend Dom has been through the years, as do most of us in our friendships. There are lots of flaws in Teddy, which why is easy to write because we all know what Teddy feels at sometimes with unrequited love, and such.

Rutting for Teddy/Dom!? We'll see ;)

Thanks for reading and reviewing

becca xx

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