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Review:collette michelle says:
We were never allowed to slide down the steps as kids (but we still did). Maman would have a fit! Papa didn't care, but no one finds wooden steps fun to slide down, so we never did at his house.

I like the humour that was in the chapter. Hugo, was a laugh. I love that by the time he made it up to where Molly was staying he was bushed. Lily was just lovely too, may I ask how old you imagine her in this? I love her pestering Al about his GF and then getting on Molly and Teddy for flirting. Oh, Al was just sweet too! Keeping out of it and all.

I am glad you didn't skip the family stuff. Some of my favourite things to read/write are when the whole lot is together. It seems as so much is going on, and it so fun.

I think we need more Teddy without a shirt. Ha! Regardless, I was thrilled you updated, and I can't wait for more. This wedding has me rather curious, plus I want to see more Teddy!

Lovely job!
xx.
Collette

Author's Response: Collette, it's lovely to hear from you! I haven't seen you around much lately ^_^

When I was younger there was hardly a day when I didn't slide down the stairs! I was in love with it and you just couldn't stop me, no matter how many times I bashed into the wall on the way down :P.

Ah, I'm glad that you enjoyed it! I wondered if anyone would even find this chapter remotely funny, lol. I love Hugo too. I thought that he definitely needed more love in fan fiction, so why not take it upon myself to give it to him? I see her as eighteen years old, idealistic and fresh out of Hogwarts. Not overly naive, but young and sure enough of herself not to be self conscious. Yes, I imagine Albus as up for a laugh, but definitely the peace keeper in that Potter family.

I didn't really want to skip it, I was just scared of it dragging and boring everyone to death :P. I do enjoy writing it too! Sometimes it's just hard to know what's going on, Lol.

I think we need LOTS more Teddy. My main problem with this chapter was probably the lack of Teddy time. I think that he'll be around a lot more in the next chapter ;). And as for the wedding? It's going to be hectic...

Thank you so much for taking the time to review again, Collette!

Jane xx


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