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Review:DJjazzyCarlton says:
"Oliver Martinez as the other thug." Oh my goodness...I don't know why but when I saw this I just burst out laughing...I love the visual aid idea. I'm also really loving this story!! I love how consistent this story has been. Sometimes, you start reading a story and from the third chapter on it just goes downhill, even though the beginning was great. But not this story! This has been amazing all the way through! I really want to apologize for not reviewing the entire story! :( But I shall definitely do that soon!!

So this chapter was AMAZING! I can't even begin to describe it...there are so many components that made it so perfect. Okay, first off, your writing in general is just absolutely wonderful. The imagery and descriptions and detail...I'm in love with it. And your characterizations! So perfect! I love how you've portrayed these characters! Everytime I read this story I feel like I'm sitting down to watch a really good action movie; I can see everything perfectly within my mind. And the plot is so exciting and original!! Grace's character is just awesome. I love how she just doesn't take crap from anybody and the last few lines of the chapter were just absolutely incredible. You not only ended the chapter perfectly plot-wise but you ended it perfectly stylistic wise as well (hopefully that made sense...).

Anyways, I loved this chapter and this story is shaping up incredibly! Amazing job, Kalina!! :) 10/10


Author's Response: Jazzy! Oh, my goodness! LOL, I'm glad that sentence amused you! Oliver Martinez was an original contender for Rasheed, so I just had to stick him in somewhere. Gosh, thank you so much! *blushes furiously* I can't begin to tell you how much that means to me - I've been working for so long on this story that it feels like it's been with me forever, but it hasn't! And then I remember that though I've nearly completed the story in my head, it's not down on paper. Bah. XD Please don't apologize for not reviewing! I'm happy just knowing that you've read it, and that you enjoyed it. :)

Oh, thank heavens! The first few lines were stagnating at the bottom of the document and I just didn't know where to go with it! But ultimately I pushed myself through (thanks to NaNo) and so here it was! *blush* Thank you! I'm so pleased you like the characters. :) As for the movie - well, I write the way I imagine things, so perhaps that's where my very visual writing style comes from. I do love the abstract, though, and I envy writers who can make someone think just by using a few select words. Bahaha! I had so much trouble with this chapter's end! But I am /so/ relieved to hear it worked out well. Phew! :) You've taken a great load off of my chest, Jazzy. Thank you! ^^

Thank you so, so much for this amazing, amazing review, my dear. :) I can't begin to tell you how much I appreciated it! *hugs*
XOXO, Kalina

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