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Review:Jellyman says:
Wow, Melanie - I know now what you meant about weird. This WAS weird. And I am completely in awe of it!

Using the metaphor of the clock was a great idea - it really gave lift to the idea of Albus moving forward, and Gellert going backwards. While I would not necessary notice the slash the first read over, once I thought about it for a while, it really hit me. Like, why they were so connected, you know?

I completely adore these reflective pieces, you know. They're amazing and I so jealous that you can a) write them at all, and b) write them so well! This has a sort of dreamy effect and I love all the metaphors and bits of personification you slipped in - ugh, amazing! Jealous, jealous, jealous.

My favourite bits: I didnít realize until later that the great star had blinded me.
This is so canon, it's almost scary. So very, very true and you got that idea across splendidly.
How is it, Albus? How is it in your sacred tower?
There is a mocking tone to this, and I just adore it. Love love love!
For you gave me lift, and I gave you gravity, and so we merely hung, suspended, unable to walk nor fly.
Again, I loved it - it really brought across a) the romantic component, and b) the idea that they were never going to be able to be together. AMAZING.

Anyway, this was completely amazing and I resent you for being able to write this even when suffering from The Block :P Surreal, captivating and, as stated before, so canon, it's scary! Stop making the rest of us look bad!

Wonderful, Mel ♥
10/10
xx

Author's Response: Georgia.

You speak nonsense. :-P

I have no idea where the clock thing came from, but I do like how it worked out. The thing about clocks moving in reverse was just a random idea that came to me, and I sort of built the whole piece around that concept.

And it's true, this isn't totally slashy - but it's there, just a bit, so I think I can still consider it my first actual slash. XD

Thanks for the quotes! I always love seeing the lines that make the biggest impact - and those quotes were some of my favorite to write.

Thanks so much, Georgia! Your reviews mean the world to me!

xoxo
Melanie


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