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Review:InvisibleWitch19 says:
This chapter was definitely as good as the first one. Great job.

I was reading on so ecstatically because the way you left us readers hanging in the last chapter made me so excited. Rose being in the stall and Franky shouting out her name was so exciting and made the scene more fun to read. The way you wrote the scene was realistic and I could imagine the setting when Rose was there.

I wonder what her dream meant. The strange Latin words just creep me out and I think she might be having scary visions like Harry's somewhat. The fact that the train didn't come was so intriguing, especially when none of the professors said anything about it. The Quarantine Room and the bubble were also reasonable additions to the chapter, too.

This chapter was quite well-written with all the great descriptions and dialogue. The plot was very exciting, of course, so I do hope you update soon. Don't hesitate to re-request, I am highly encouraging you to do so because this story is just so good. Keep up the excellent work. :)

-InviWitchie019

Author's Response: Once again, so sorry for the delay in my response :)

Thank you AGAIN for the wonderful review! It's very helpful ^^

~Mercy

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