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Review:InvisibleWitch19 says:
Hey, it's InviWitchie019 here for the review you requested.

I never quite expected to read such an interesting story as this but when I read the summary, I was immediately curious. The plot for this is very original and intriguing, which could gain you more readers. The disease also seems so scary, too. Your writing is very realistic, which makes the story more exciting to read.

The people's reactions to the disease at the start of the chapter are exactly what I think I would feel. The fact that the sickness is so far incurable is quite threatening, especially because they're wizards with wands and potions. What happened to Harvey was sad, I could totally connect to his fear since he knew he could have the disease.

There were a few errors which I spotted but then some reviews before me already pointed them out and I know how it feels like when people point out the same stuff over again. Glad to know that your edits are in the queue, as you said in one of the previous author responses.

I gasped when Rose touched Harvey and I knew- I just knew!- that sooner or later, she might have gotten it. Excellent plot twist, that was and I was sure that her Gryffindor side would take over although she was a Ravenclaw. Anyway, this chapter was very well-written and do you know that I'm typing as fast as I could right now so I could get to the next chapter right away? Yes, that is how good you are.

Oh- quick question: How did you come up with the disease name, Morbus? Keep up the brilliant work! :)
-InviWitchie019

Author's Response: Sorry about taking so long to respond! Thank you so much for reviewing and giving your feedback, it was very helpful.

And to answer your question, I didn't come up with it :) I knew how many terms and spells in the Harry Potter world are based off of Latin words, so... Morbus literally means disease in Latin ^^

~Mercy


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