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Review:dracos_hotter says:
Hey, here from the forums =)

Firstly, I'm glad to see it's a song I know and like. Yay!

The wedding thing... Personally, I think you could tie the August 15th chunk into the wedding, as an introduction. It seems a little random, just sitting there. It made no sense whatsoever to me to include it until I saw the wedding was the scene of their reunion of sorts.

Grammar and puncuation wise, it was near perfect, with a few problems surrounding dialogue, but that could easily be fixed.

You said you wanted me to focus on your possible over descriptive work; I don't think it's too much, it's just right. You know where to stop and start, and that's great.

I like this piece, it's pretty and light. Keep up the great work!


Author's Response: First of all, thank you for the review! Your feedback will help me a lot.
I'll look back at the wedding part and the August 15th chunk. As of right now I'm not too sure what you're talking about (to be honest!) but once I look back I promise I'll consider your suggestion.
I'm so glad you think the description was just right. I was hoping it wasn't too overwhelming. And of course any author strives to be punction-error free, so I'm glad I'm close to that! :)
Thanks again for the review! I'm glad you liked the story.

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